Matt - I love this new updated version. Thank you for your hard work
I have proof read the new version. Here are the corrections, IMO, needed:
Page 19 – Footnote 36: It might be useful to explain that this tile was reprinted for later RGG editions and might well be included in some players’ sets.
EDIT:
Haven't looked at 5.0b3 yet, but you may want to add something to footnote 36 saying that that CRCR tile has since had a later version printed in some boxed versions of I&C, as well as in the Big Box.
- sorry, missed that.
Page 20 – Footnote 42 (and also pictured example): Actually, the footnote is wrong. The
Big Box rules are correct. The city does indeed score 24 points. The 2nd pennant is obscured by the follower on the tile, the tile being the only ‘cccf’ tile in that arrangement and that includes a pennant. So at present it is the CAR that is incorrect here.
Page 47 – Paragraph 4: “…reason for this is that, unlike all the other expansions described here, the
GQ11 expansion is the product of Rio Grande Games. It may be possible to use the tile as if it were a pig-herd tile, but this would be a house rule, rather than an official rule”
This is now not unlike all the other expansions (CS&C is a product of RGG also). Also, as a side note, this is a perfect place to show an unofficial house rule off in a shaded box
Page 69 – “
Question: When the two River sets are combined, should we make two rivers (using the two spring) or discard one spring and one lake and make just one river?
Answer: One spring and one lake are discarded”.
To be consistent with the previous footnote (31) an ‘s’ needs adding after ‘spring’.
Page 71 – The colour of the text changes on this page. Not a major problem, I know.
Page 72 – “The three tiles above are all grouped under different sections, even though they may all be used to connect two city segments on the left and right. Both the tiles tiles are found under ‘City, city, city, city’”
This paragraph is quite confusing. It needs a new paragraph before the sentence that begins with ‘Both’ and preferably the word ‘below’ included in the sentence. It might be better to put the new paragraph underneath the tile examples and include the word ‘above’.
Page 95 – The title ‘fêtes’ needs a capital ‘F’.
I think that's about it for now